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The second installment in the story!!! As you can see, Mileena had locked a poor, starving Jade to her chair, and forced her to participate in the surprise she has for Kitana!!! Want to know what the suprise is? Stick around for Part 3 to find out!!

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chymesRB
You need to break up lines of dialogue when a different person is speaking. You have Mileena and Jade's dialogue in the same block when they should be their own paragraphs. There's more clarity in your writing that way.